[totesraunch]

This thing is riddled with typos.

[madmax96]

There's also not really an evaluation section. So how can we conclude it is effective?

[LeifCarrotson]

English isn't the author's first language, I doubt you'd do better in Bengali!

[totesraunch]

No problem with people who know more than one language (even without complete written fluency)… but why not have some third party editing/proof reading? Especially when submitting research to the NIH--which will live on in posterity.

Poorly written papers reduce the readers ability to focus on the content, however well researched.

[iqanq]

Having seen the photos, I'm just glad it's written in English.