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by systemtrigger 5412 days ago
Maybe so, but he should also probably revise his website starting with the confusing and grammatically bad copy:

"MicroMaximus is a simple on-demand service designed to assist Reward Checking Account holders' to supplement their monthly transaction requirements. MicroMaximus users will be able to schedule $1.00 transactions online quickly and securely enabling a higher rate of return."

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Anyone up for iterating that copy for practice? Here's my attempt:

"MicroMaximus helps you fill your monthly Reward Checking Account transaction requirements quickly with $1 transactions."

"Fill your monthly Reward Checking Account transaction requirements quickly with $1 transactions."
Have a Rewards Checking Account?

Use $1 charges to meet minimum monthly transactions

"Profit $500 monthly with Reward Checking Account"
Where is the benefit? Don't forget that he has to sell the customer on RCAs as well!

Earn higher interest from your checking account. Get a reward checking account from your bank and use MicroMaximus to meet the minimum transaction limit.

The Easiest Way to Meet Your Rewards Checking Account Requirements.
Get higher checking interest rates without the hassle from required transactions.