It seems a lot better now. I just upvoted while before I abstained (while you appeared to be downvoted). I am in a bit of a rush right now so I only read the first two bullets. They both seem good to me now.
Thanks for not taking my comment badly or ignoring it!
I also found out about Orion by looking through your comments!
Thanks for not taking my comment badly or ignoring it!
I also found out about Orion by looking through your comments!