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by hluska 5429 days ago
Hi Vijay...

Thanks for posting your site - for the most part it is quite good, however, I also have some helpful criticism. Before I get started, I'll tell you a little bit about my environment. I am using Ubuntu 11.04 and Chromium.

Good stuff first:

- your site seems quite fast.

- I like the 'what/why/how' in your main menu.

- I like your contact form.

And now onto some things that I think you should fix:

- when you hover over the main menu, it changes the size of the text. This causes the items to shift to the right. Personally, I find this quite distracting.

- if your goal is to serve North America, you should check your copy. Please don't be insulted, but there are several grammatical errors. Unfortunately, I find it quite hard to understand, to the point that I would be nervous to send you a requirements document.

- the site is a little monochrome - if I were you, I would add a little more colour.

- your call to action is in the bottom right hand corner of the page, if I were you, I would make this a little bit more prominent. I am also almost positive that if you did a round of A/B testing, you would find that 'Get in Touch' is not the most optimal phrase for your call to action.

- The phrase to the left of the call to action is not formatted very well. Not only is it two separate blocks (when it should be a paragraph), but the word 'talk' appears just below the #9bb8b9 box

- You should pay a little more attention to your subpages. Personally, I don't think the MVP item belongs in your main menu. And 'what', 'why' and 'how' look like walls of text. Frankly, I didn't read them.

My email address should be in my profile - send me a message if you would like me to check if you have resolved any of the interface problems that I noticed. It is entirely possible that they are just a quirk of my particular environment.

Best of luck

Greg

1 comments

Greg ... Thanks for taking time to provide your valuable feedback and will try to work on those changes and get back to you
Thanks Vijay!
I have made changes to content layouts and bought new domain as well please take a look http://www.ileanapp.com let me know your view