| Hey, congrats on the launch and looks like a great idea and concept! Just a small note - you might want to get a copywriter to go over your front page, and just go through it with a fine-tooth comb. As a few examples: * Phrases like "Child's own Science Universe" don't make full grammatical sense, although "Your child's own science universe" could. * The quote from Arush is incomplete. Other quotes have grammatical errors. * "789000 Facts" has no comma while "300,000+ Learners" does. Should just be consistent. * "following are trademark of Elixar Systems Private Limited." should be "trademarks" however it is not followed by a list of trademarks. * "cause confusion among coustomers, or in any manner that disparate" should be customers and disparages. You will find that people are allowed to disparage your brand though, using your brand name :) (criticism isn't protected). Only small things, but important at looking professional :) |