[rjbond3rd]

1. I'm not sure I understand how you're differentiating your approach. More in-person stuff, less online chatting? Why should someone switch?

2. "Real connection happens in person" is slightly hard for my brain to parse, because "connection" is abstract. "Real connections happen in person" is easier to parse (but might sound cheesy).

[ttran08]

1. Interacting with people through text is different from interacting with them in person. People are just naturally wired to express themselves better in person. That's our opinion.

2. Ah, the grammar nazi in you is strong. Your correction sounds better to us (cheesiness aside).