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by lkrubner
1782 days ago
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“She is publishing under her real name” You are responding to her yet you use the 3rd person. You meant to write: “You are publishing under your real name” This is a complicated use of first person and third person: “She sounds as if she genuinely believes somebody will send her anthrax through the post - do you really believe that is a real possibility or do you think her battle with sexism in the workplace has gone slightly off the rails?” You meant to write: “You sound as if you genuinely believe somebody will send you anthrax through the post - do you really believe that is a real possibility or do you think your battle with sexism in the workplace has gone slightly off the rails?” Since she wrote it, she probably does believe it. |
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