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by SubiculumCode 1810 days ago
I mean there is nothing "wrong" with starting at the 2nd paragraph (and that was was just for the more limited Laplace version of Poisson's), its just not generally the most effective writing style. Yes, there is some subjectivity here, but writing is hard, and it is only through criticism that we learn to be better technical writers.

The first paragraph of the conclusion would have better served as the Introductory remark: "Poisson's equation comes up in many domains. Once you know how to recognize it and solve it, you will be capable of simulating a very wide range of physical phenomena." That is a great sentence. I'm interested now, and I know its context.

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> it is only through criticism that we learn to be better technical writers.

Hence the line of questioning. Thanks for the response!