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by gk1 1831 days ago
I think the issue is grammar, not jargon. There are many grammar mistakes which make it difficult to understand. I recommend you check the text through Grammarly, or ask someone for help reviewing the text.
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D2man 1831 days ago
Sorry for my poor english ! I'll ckeck grammarly
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gk1 1831 days ago
At the very least I recommend fixing the headline to avoid confusion:

Introducing Alternative, the community-powered search engine for software

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D2man 1830 days ago
On your advice, I have edited the title.
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cutemonster 1831 days ago
Agreed, I was confused too
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