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jstn455
1876 days ago
Which part exactly? The bit about 2-7 players?
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jalbertoni
1875 days ago
The first sentence, so we know what to expect. Right now, it's very "okay, this is a game, but how does it work?"
A pair of screenshots of a game in progress would also help wonders.
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bemmu
1876 days ago
Just the first sentence already would be an improvement, as now people will probably just bounce seeing a login button with no explanation.
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jstn455
1876 days ago
You’re totally right, I’ll spruce up the front page. Thanks for the feedback.
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A pair of screenshots of a game in progress would also help wonders.