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by jstn455 1876 days ago
Which part exactly? The bit about 2-7 players?
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The first sentence, so we know what to expect. Right now, it's very "okay, this is a game, but how does it work?"

A pair of screenshots of a game in progress would also help wonders.

Just the first sentence already would be an improvement, as now people will probably just bounce seeing a login button with no explanation.
You’re totally right, I’ll spruce up the front page. Thanks for the feedback.