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by phnofive
1892 days ago
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> See why, it’s probably an extra word you can cut. Or at the very least, a convoluted phrase you can simplify. This advice is backwards, for example. Try: > See why, it’s probably a convoluted phrase you can simplify. Or at the very least an extra word you can cut. Better (I’ll even use a fun comma): > It’s probably due to a convoluted phrase you can simplify, or an extra word you can cut. |
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