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by pySSK 1986 days ago
This is poorly written. I lost interest a minute into the article and skimmed the rest of it and didn't take much from it. The blob before the first subheading just repeats that the Toronto scene is not a good one – this could have taken just 3-5 sentences, and not 5 paragraphs. The part about good/bad angels, finite/infinite game typically would have been interesting to me but I was asleep by then. I recommend putting a summary in the first blob, and/or making the subheadings more informative e.g. instead of "Angels" "Deal Speed and Founder Leverage", should say "Angels are Shortsighted and Play Finite Games" and "Deal Speeds are Magnitudes Slower".