[nondeveloper]

I had to read this a few times to understand what your product is, maybe because I wanted to stop reading halfway through the first sentence. Most people scan and if the first scan is too hard they move on.

I think the first sentence should have shorter, simpler words.

Maybe: “Build an online community in two clicks with DiscoFlip. Easier to configure and monetize than Reddit or Facebook Groups.”

[riantogo]

I was using the template as-is from the article. Personally I like the brevity of your version much better. If you don't mind, I would love to use it.

[nondeveloper]

Please do. It would be my honor.