[idclip]

Im sorry, but this was alot of fluff to read. Good visuals, though, i see what you mean.

DevSecOps might be interesting. Looking forward.

Im an ops guy.

Edit: we need management to understand this.

[tinodelletna]

Yes, I guess too much intro... if you have any specific feedback on parts I could have left unsaid it will be great to know for next time.

About management, totally agree. That's why we are already working on the next two articles.

[idclip]

I would skip:

   1. introducing IaC, 
   2. and the OOP/functiobal bits

This stuff really just repeats itself everywhere.

I would: directly put my method in an RFC style

   1. „this is what this is (jpg here, maybe two comparison graphics. Of old arch, and yours), 
   2. and here how it works. 

I did find the pet/catle metaphor great. im not against prose.

[tinodelletna]

This is really great feedback! Thanks, we will definitely take this into account when writing more technical documentation.