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by piratejon 2058 days ago
Reading the last paragraph, I did not come away with the same impression you did: "Regina is now a photography technician at Barnet and Southgate College."
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I think OP meant the past tense they used when talking about Regina. The last paragraph did clear the confusion.
And the fact that it was "discovered" which makes it sound like it was found in a dead person's lab or something. The article really gives the impression that she's dead, which is odd if that's not what is intended.