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by grawprog
2037 days ago
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I'm sorry, but i didn't like this article. The purpose of writing is to communicate an idea. Something this article failed to do. If there's one thing I was taught that's most important in writing is be concise and get to the point. This article sure talks about a lot of things, it uses a lot of words, but it wanders aimlessly and doesn't focus on anything. There's two kinds of writing. The kinds shown and mentioned in the article that allows you to put out a flow of ideas. this kind of writing is meant to be turned into the second kind of writing. A concise summary of said ideas focused in a way that easily communicates said idea to other readers. This article should be the second kind of writing focused on the author's epiphany about the first kind of writing. Instead, it's reads like an unrefined stream of conciousness written down during the author's epiphany. That kind of stuff is hard to read without being turned into the second kind of writing. |
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