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by noelwelsh
2033 days ago
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Leaving aside the technical content the post uses uncommon words and constructions that obscure its meaning. In other words it is overwritten. Taking the first paragraph as an example, you could make it much easier to read by: replacing "tenet" and "antithetical" with simpler words, removing the "of course", and breaking some of those run-on sentences into smaller sentences. I'm reminded of patio11's writing. There's a man who never uses one word when three will do. I expect I will now be excommunicated from HN. :-) |
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