| No offense intended, but your landing page is a bit rough. If you don't mind some feedback: - The header "The simplest tool for remote and international teams" doesn't mean anything. The simplest tool for doing what? I have no idea what this is after reading it. - On a related note, I'm not really sure what the name of the service is. Is it meant to be like "Say Yo Name"? If so, maybe you could change the header to something like "Say Yo Name! Help your remote and international teammates pronounce your name" - The undismissable floating "start video chat" box is really awful, especially on mobile where it takes up almost half the screen. - "the whole team creates profiles and record names" -> "records names” - "Call users using build in video chat functionality" -> "built-in" - "Add video chat to any website. It is a couple line of HTML to copy to any website." is awkward. I'd suggest changing the second line to "...with only a couple lines of code" or something similar. - "Pronunciation is different, though, not easier, at all." is a really awkward sentence. "Pronunciation is different, though not at all easier." is much clearer. - "Next time don't pretend that your colleague hasn't got a name." -> "Next time don't pretend that your colleague doesn't have a name." - "Start video chat, share screen, no camera? Just chat!" -> "Start video chat or share your screen. No camera? Just chat!" |
Appreciate your feedback, it is probably due to the fact English is my second language.
I'll have a look at updating the website taking into consideration your comments!