| Looked like one of those fake ad landing pages at first glance. I think the reason for this is that there is a lot of whitespace (maybe off-white would work better) and the header text isn't stylized. Additionally the slogan "Watching Web Videos Is as Easy as Watching TV" seems too long, I had to read it before I really understood it...imagine that! It really is a simple sentence, but somehow the meaning was a little obfuscated by its layout and sizing. I think the main reason for this was that the text was too big...bigger than the "Topchan.tv" text at least. The 3 steps could definitely pop a lot more. Adding background colors to those boxes should help with that. They have to look separated, not really mixed in with all the other text. You could replace the text "Watching Web Videos Is as Easy as Watching TV" and "Let you watch web videos like regular TV" with just "Watch web videos like regular TV", much more concise. The try it now button seems uninviting, probably because of the mechanical looking font. You could probably reduce all 3 steps into 1 step of "Try it now!" and just have a button. You could get rid of everything else and just have the text "Watch web videos like regular TV" (centered) and under it have a button that says "Try it now" and I think it would come across better. You should then also have a "Learn More" button where you can have more text. Text is distracting, your goal is to get them to click the button, make it a focus. Just my 2cents |
You are right. The 3 steps are superficial. I have trouble coming up with 3 steps. It's really just 1 step.
Great feedback. I'll make the changes to simplify the page.