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by debbiedowner
2066 days ago
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Do you think if you wrote it slower it would be a little less weird? Eel is the weirdest thing to eat with strangers. Her biology was like a movie. These things are brilliant in a Delillo like way but the flow is too fast. Also making a butterfly thing? |
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As mentioned below, this is the first draft release. I loved some of the absurd things and re-rinsed when it got too bizarre.