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by jkingsbery
2093 days ago
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Leaving aside grammar/spelling/weird choice, it's not clear what this is for or why someone would want to sign up. Landing Pages usually a landing page for a thing - it's not clear what the thing is here (other than something having to do with liking UBI, I guess?). |
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No, please, don't leave that aside :) The French version is really convincing from my opinion and 5 external opinions. It's a translation problem.
"it's not clear what the thing is here"
As i mention in an another comment, as long as I haven't managed to reach the technical level I want to reach, it's difficult to say more without being incomprehensible.
... But, apparently, it won't be worse than now :D
See this share as a way to warm-up the thing : I will be better next time !