[quickthrower2]

Feels like something’s missing. You had me hooked with the copy - it’s really intriguing but then it sort of just goes to a opt in form with no explaination about what you are offering? I’m confused and a bit disappointed.

[Johan_Bavaud]

It saddens me to know that you feel that way, sincerely.

I would have liked to show more, but I'm absolutely not "technically" ready.

By posting ROI, I wanted to get some criticism about the technical and aesthetics side first since it's my "hello world". I am not really looking for subscribers (otherwise I have to upgrade my account).

That was more just to see if everything goes fine with a bit more traffic than me refreshing the page :D

[quickthrower2]

Don’t want you to feel sad! All you need is to describe what it is you are doing. Even at a high level. I’m building a XYZ. The page is otherwise 99% there.