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by dannyincolor
2147 days ago
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I think this has great potential, and immediately understood the value offering of it before visiting the page. That said, I'm glad you're re-crafting the landing page. A couple suggestions/phrasings that come to mind and - at least in my opinion - would quickly convey the intent of the platform:
"Make the world your next convention venue" Okay, maybe I'm worse at this than I thought... |
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