[unignorant]

A few comments:

I found that page-loads were a bit slow. And if I hadn't come from HN, I doubt that I would have clicked on "learn more", so you may want to move your copy directly to the landing page. Also, you might improve the typography.

The copy itself seems pretty good. I think you mixed in the right amount of subtlety. If I had to reword:

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Want to pay $34/month on a six month contract? We have a match for you. But not us.

Want to answer 400 pointless questions? We can find you harmony. But not us.

Want something all about free and all about flakes? We have a spot for you to fish. But not us.

AKChances is different. And different is good.

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I have little expertise in building/market landing pages, so take my advice with a grain of salt ;-)

[nmaio]

Moving the "learn more" copy to the landing page is definitely a possibility, but I feel like it might be too much text. And yeah, the way you reworded the copy makes it smoother for sure. I need to tweak it some more per your suggestions. Thanks for the detailed response, unignorant.