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by billforsternz 2199 days ago
Interesting article thanks. A little constructive feedback on some language in the conclusion. "Football is a game of space. That's why parking the bus can actually allow to win a match." The second sentence doesn't make sense unfortunately. Worse, it's not really possible to work out what it means either. It sounds like you mean "That's why parking the bus can be a good strategy" (or something like that). But the first sentence sets up the exact opposite expectation, a sentence like "That's why parking the bus is never a good strategy" would be compatible with the first sentence. Sadly the reader is left not knowing whether you're saying one thing, or the complete opposite.

I understand English is unlikely to be your first language. Please read this as a genuine attempt to be helpful.
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pvg 2199 days ago
There's a grammatical hiccup there with the 'allow' but the meaning is quite clear for soccer-fluent readers.
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billforsternz 2199 days ago
Completely unclear to me and I've been soccer (football) fluent for over 50 years. I know what parking the bus means (for non football fans - it means falling back and defending in numbers). If football is really a game of space it should be a poor strategy. Is the author saying parking the bus is good or bad strategy?
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pvg 2199 days ago
It's a strategy that gives up possession in exchange for denying offensive space to the opponent and relies on exploiting (through counter attacks) the defensive space the attacker opens. When executed well, it can win games but it's not amenable to the type of analysis presented in this write-up. That's what the bit is about.
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billforsternz 2199 days ago
Aha, so essentially he meant "football is a game of space, that's why parking the bus is an interesting strategy". Thank you. Too much binary thinking from me. I often struggle to discern the meaning of unclear writing. Which is probably why I spend disproportionate time on my own writing polishing and rewriting for clarity. But I still fail regularly, it's not an easy problem.
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pvg 2199 days ago
Glad it helped! I brain-pretzeled myself over soundness in this very forum just last year:

https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=20196575

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billforsternz 2199 days ago
An interesting and educational thread

> "I've now come to understand the two chief weapons of the JIT remain surprise, fear, ruthless efficiency and an almost fanatical devotion to the Pope."

I like this very much. Even adding nice red uniforms, it's still two chief weapons.

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