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by brandly 2207 days ago
The tiny paragraphs are really jarring to read.
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esperent 2207 days ago
These are not paragraphs.

They are lonely disjointed sentences.

Floating freely.

In a sea of whitespace.

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yepthatsreality 2207 days ago
It’s a draft for the blog post the author never wrote.
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0d311 2207 days ago
+1 on this, paragraphs are meant to group ideas. The way they’re used here, there might as well be just a wall of text with no paragraph delineations at all.
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ken 2207 days ago
Not every new line must have the same meaning. Do you also look down on James Joyce, T.S. Eliot, Ezra Pound?
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dhosek 2207 days ago
This wasn't poetry.
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