[BorisBomega]

I left those details out because I didn't think they would add to the story. The big company was KPN to which I sold my WiFi Hotspot operator in 2003. The manager who told me the story was Jan Kroon and it was about a manager he reported to. See, all that info doesn't make the story that more interesting really.

[dhimes]

Actually, it's those details that do make the story interesting. Some little details that make the characters seem real are essential to hold your audience. (At least, so says my wife, who is a writer.)