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by doublez
5592 days ago
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Great stuff - thanks for the work! Minor UI nits: - your value proposition is in the "it's XXX but you can get there for YYY". Put that front and center and give it a better visual treatment than the insufficiently anti-aliased black sans ;) - the $10 sleeve makes you think hard where it's at right now. Move everything related to $10 only in one spot. The entire copy under "EXPERIENCED TRAVELERS HELP YOU SAVE TIME AND MONEY" could be compressed to a couple bullet points. - "How do we do it" doesn't need to be on the front page - it distract from the goal of getting me to try |
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