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by JeremyReeves
5584 days ago
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1 thing I noticed is that the longer version is REALLY cramped and a lot harder to read than the short version. I'd suggest making a lot more white space in the longer version for easier reading. The shorter version also has a headline, the longer kind of does but it's not noticeable. Keep running tests - you'll find a winner! :) |
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