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by olegious
2269 days ago
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Great idea, just some copywriting fixes: 1. "runs the latest scams techniques on your team" should be "runs the latest scam techniques on your team" 2. "trainings" while technically a word, native English speakers will find it odd as you rarely see it used. use "training" instead, ex: "We get it: trainings are annoying" to "We get it: training is annoying" 3. "Riot offers an interactive, tailor-made 5-minutes training your employees will actually enjoy and learn from." to "Riot offers an interactive, tailor-made, 5-minute training your employees will actually enjoy and learn from." 4. "Riot will perform attacks and trainings on your team" to "Riot will perform attacks and training for your team" |
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