[netsharc]

Gah, interesting story.

But terrible presentation.

Hundreds of paragraphs.

Of just 1 or 2 sentences.

Maybe some like reading that stuff.

But I was just scrolling.

Trying to find the meat.

Authors, learn to be more concise.

[yabatopia]

I liked it. The presentation didn't bother me at all, maybe because I read the story on a relatively small smartphone screen. For smaller screens, the formatting works really well.

It was an entertaining read, well written, so kudos to the author for sharing his story in an interesting way.

[jmkni]

I thought it was fine, personally.