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by ISO-morphism
2343 days ago
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To the author - congratulations on the success so far! Additional nits from a native US English speaker, hope they're helpful: * "$5.00 / Per Month" - the "/" is read as "per," so it reads as "five dollars per per month." Should drop either the slash or the "per." * "...Billed annually. Or..." - these are dependent clauses, should be "...Billed annually, or..." |
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