[moe]

You badly need a screencast or image-slideshow on there - show, not tell!

I had to force myself to read through that text-pitch - under normal conditions I'd have closed the tab after the first 1-2 sentences. Partly because it's not well written and partly due to the fancy font that makes it hard to read.

[ved]

Thanks, screencast is almost complete. Thanks for reviewing the text too - I will try to change it asap..