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by wyclif
5605 days ago
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Your description text needs help, particularly the first sentence: Socl is the social calendar and to-do list. Your calendar events will be posted to your social world(only if you wish) 1. Socl is not the social calendar, it is a social calendar. I don't know why the "-ial" in social has a strikethrough. 2. You need a space between the end of "world" and the beginning of the parenthesis. 3. Socl is in its early stage - something like a pre-alpha. Wait, "something like" pre-alpha? I think you mean "pre-alpha", right? It would be much more succinct and better in every way to simply say, "Socl is in pre-alpha release" or, alternatively, "Socl is pre-alpha." |
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