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by jacquesm
2399 days ago
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I think it is your use of the word 'insane' that is confusing to people, suggest rewording that passage to make it more clear what you mean. Right now to a non-native English speaker/writer/reader such as me it reads as though you think that what they are doing is not good and that what you do is better. |
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