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>As a customer, I don't understand what is your product. Is it contact management, is it text sending, is it global numbers? There are no screenshots, no videos, just text. I won't be filling in 6 fields just to "see" what is your product. Show, don't tell. Exactly my impression, I had a hard time to understand (maybe) what is the actual "scope". But I would say "Show, besides tell", right now not only the "show" part is missing, but also IMHO a clear, simple "tell" part (a small text describing what is offered would be enough). As a customer, I find of little (actualy no) use the paragraphs about sending a text message in 15 seconds with this (or that) scripting or programming language and I sincerely don't care about Mr. Hanselman's opinion on .Net 5. As a side note, being not a native English speaker, I could not understand quite a few things on how your "Plans" work, I had to look on a dictionary for "Overages" (and even after having read the exact definition I am not too convinced it is the right term to describe what you charge for each message exceeding the included amount). As well, probably it is a language barrier, but I would much better understand "Text messages" than "Texts". |