[noobiemcfoob]

It's not just "not bad." It's scary. It makes enough coherent sense from sentence to sentence that I doubt my mom (missing a few marbles) would notice it doesn't make a whole lot of sense. Combine this...some official looking logos and a request for money for a fine.

Determining an actual official government or other institutional request is going to get much harder.

[sean2]

I don't see the danger here though; how is this scarier than what a couple guys in Nigeria could concoct to fool your mom? Any English speaker can still put together a much more coherent an official sounding institutional request.