[glastra]

I would have expected this to be proof-read, as it is a direct excerpt taken from a book, but it is filled with mistakes. Spelling, grammar, word order...

Maybe it is an excerpt of the first manuscript of the book.

Other than that, I find the concept very interesting, but quite intuitive too.

[eythian]

Thought the same. It needs a good editor to take things out, his thoughts on lemonade aren't really necessary.