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by bgdnyxbjx 2498 days ago
On top of the generally absurd claims made in the official Google post, that writing was just terrible. Comma splices all over the place, sentences starting with So and But, very strange tone and wording in some things. Did anyone edit this?

Oh and I love the “thank you in advance for your help” lol what?

1 comments

Starting a sentence with conjunction is not grammatically incorrect. https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/words-to-not-b...
So you are saying that this was a totally fine way to write? But it sounds very awkward and sloppy to me. Maybe, it’s just me.
I mean, you just used both of the ones that you mentioned in this comment alone, unless that was intentional. I think it sounds fine, so long as the writing is not intended to be super formal.