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by MagicPropmaker 2565 days ago
I don't like the weaselly passive voice. And it's still not clear if a person who doesn't have the clout on social media can get attention.
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What jumped out to you as weaselly? It read more like a blameless postmortem to me than weaseling around (unlike any of the recent big PII breaches), and they acknowledged that this needs to be something they respond more quickly to directly.
Thanks for the pointer. I'm going to blame my dad/up bringing for my over use of passive voice. He will be deeply amused by this. I will read the paper and attempt to improve.