| Having seen your landing page and the video, this about the app: - I liked the simplicity and the concept of the app a lot. - Does the msging in any way interact with sending SMSs/IMs? - It's a great idea to be able to message your sharing friends, but what's the quickest way to reach your friend after you receive a pin from them? Think through the usage scenarios - and flaunt them! "It [the whole scenario] just works" is your best friend. - Ask your non-techie users/friends about the scenarios and make sure you listen a lot. The landing page: - show don't tell. More pictures less txt... (take a leaf from the big A). - I wouldn't use the word "setup" at all, when you've basically intelligently managed to rid your users of that chore. That's something to flaunt, whereas the very word setup IMO is a turn-off. Just go with "no sign-up"/etc. - The first paragraph to me looked like filler even if it may be good and true. It would be more appealing to me to directly explain concrete cases where the app can achieve the good things you speak of. (I hope you've watched the FaceTime commercial a lot lately) - The video is a great beginning, but turn up the voice/eq it (I had some trouble hearing it), and turn down the music a bit? - Make sure you ask non-techies how it resonates with them. Listen carefully. - The same operation on your iTunes page, and make sure the screenshots are of very self-explanatory usage cases. |