Thanks for pointing out the typos, fixed em up. Also, thanks for the feedback, you certainly have spot on comments. Writing marketing/copy text, is an art form, which I have not yet perfected, but still a work in progress.
You might look into getting a more brandable domain name as well. I registered trynode.com a couple weeks ago, for instance. There are plenty of strong names out there.
nodedemo.com, nodejump.com, nodegem.com, noderun.com -- all available.
nodedemo.com, nodejump.com, nodegem.com, noderun.com -- all available.