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by boeing767
2597 days ago
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I don't know anyone in my network who could test it out, hell at this point I'm willing to pay someone just to earnestly test it out and provide feedback that I'm so hungry for. I'm definitely looking into industry events/trade shows, I don't have the resources for a booth, but I can probably walk around with a tablet demoing my product to prospects. I'm also part of an industrial online community, but I can't just spam my app there, as it's invite-only and I don't want to get banned. My link is https://rebrand.ly/dr6a8h. Sorry for the shortened URL, I'm trying my best for my site not to be indexed by Google in case prospects search for my site. |
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1- the "cut out the insurance middleman" is just huge and don't tell me what your site is about
2- "EZ dental membership software for managing your new/existing in-house dental plan" - Got a bit confused as to what EZ dental is, as I thought this should be actually OK Dental. Also still don't know what is it that you are selling
3- "Sign Up for free" - for what? what is it that you are selling? who are you?
4- Now I see the screenshots with the stats and below it some useful information and understand more what you are offering.
I suggest you hire a professional designer to re-design your landing page as it is so confusing, size of fonts is just too big in places, I had to spend way too much time to even understand the niche you are targeting.
If you are targeting dentists, then go where they are online/offline. I would find a forum/webpage where there are a lot of dentists and buy an ad there. Alternatively just visit them and see if they are interested.