[ezekg]

Your pitch makes it sound like this is a desktop app that takes screenshots of my PC screen, so I was very confused on why anybody would want this. You should talk about why your product is beneficial -- skip the boring feature sales pitch until later on down the page after I'm interested -- don't make people think too hard about what you're offering. If it's for

> to make sure your ad/content is showing in the right place, spy on your competitors, track your seo ranking over time or simply archive your favorite website!

then you should clearly say that so that you immediately identity your product as the solution to a problem, and the people with that problem don't have to put the puzzle together themselves.

[usfslk]

I updated the landing page!