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by gota
2656 days ago
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I can't say that I agree completely with the message from this story, but I do think the point would be stronger if the last bit was changed to: The American said, “Then you would retire. Move to an exclusive coastal tourist village where you would sleep late, fish a little, play with your grandkids, take strolls with your third wife, go to an expensive place in the evenings where you could sip fancy wine and watch people who remind you of your old amigos play the guitar.” |
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