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by corysama 2662 days ago
Again, it doesn't need a book. Apparently the ORB feature is important enough that it has been mentioned many times in the discussion of this project. But, it's not given a single mention(note1) in the 1946 word description of the project.

I'm trying to get across is that you need to figure out what makes this project valuable from the point of view of the user and broadcast that loud and clear.

"It is a complete environment with build tools, project definition language, loadable text system, a virtual kernel to isolate it from the underlying OS, up through a full set of 'standard libraries', wrappers around lots of common functionality, UI framework, Object Request Broker and IDL compiler, VM based OO macro language with IDE, custom implementations of many standards (XML, PNG, ZLib, JSON, SMTP, HTTP, etc...), and lots of other functionality."

That tells me what this project is. [note1]Hey! Object Request Broker was even in there and I didn't see it in all the noise. Make that paragraph into a bullet list. It's really the most important part of the whole doc. If you have videos, other docs, link them right there. That way a visitor should be able to get a high-level impression of the project a glance. Not after interpreting the entire doc as a holistic concept.

All of the backstory, theory, goals, etc... are only interesting at all after they know that what they're dealing with and that it is actually worth investigating. Then, after they're invested in the project, they might have motivation to go elsewhere to read up on concepts like the ORB.

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OK, it's been updated.
Tremendous improvement!

Thank you for sharing your hard work with the world.