[monkbent]

This is why the entire second half of the article was detailing where I think focus should be.

[maxxxxx]

Maybe the title was already too confrontational. How about "How I would improve Warren's plan" or something like that?

[your-nanny]

yes that would have been better. didn't finish article, but headline would have kept me reading to the end because I would have expected critique to be followed with constructive suggestions