[FutureSpec]

This reads like someone's college freshman essay. It's just a recap of existing knowledge, with no concrete call to action.

[4RealFreedom]

I enjoyed the article. I do not believe every article needs to include a call to action. Describing the situation can lead others to come up with ideas for solutions.

[gipp]

I agree. It's a scattering of good (if not novel) observations about the issue, but there's just no through line connecting any of them.

The last paragraph is phrased as though it follows logically from the preceding one, when it seems to make pretty much the opposite point.