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by isserson
2803 days ago
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I really appreciate that the "hero" video _asked_ me to click. That already shows you respect me enough not to just auto-play in my face. I think the video suffers from a bit too much dramatization, especially at the end with the triumphant movie trailer music and awkward shots of people looking directly into the camera. I also think some of the copy on the main page could be edited to sound clearer and more natural. For example: * "Keys only you have access to" -> "Only you have the keys" * "Room for growth" -> "Room to grow" * "Gets better over time" -> "Always improving [etc.]" I mention all the above because I really like what I see here and I'm looking for room in my budget after I post this comment :) Good luck! |
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