| Really awesome app idea, here are my suggestions: 1) The green color scheme clashes with the red and orange banner. 2)The duck doesn't stand out because there's little contrast between it and the banner. I suggest changing the banner colors to something that blends in better with the rest of the site. 3) The barcode takes up a lot of the screen, but isn't valuable. With a short name like Zuzu, people can easily search for it on their phones. The goal is to excite them enough to search for it. 4) Get rid of the "Perch" menu bar. All those links can be horizontally listed under the banner giving you more space to show off the product. 5) Make the box of scrolling pictures MUCH bigger, stretching across the entire screen (horizontally). The words in the pics are too small to read. 6) Get rid of the "Wake up and win with Zazu" image and keep the tagline "Zuzu wakes you up verbally..." on a single line. I hope this helps. If any of this is unclear and you'd like me to make annotations on a screenshot, let me know. Goodluck! |